Full of humour...and mistakes, = =||
but a nice 'poem',if it is a one.
And the next:
Excuse me for my correcting your mistakes:
以下引用憶星在2006-10-6 12:53:18的发言：
i almost fall sleeo all periods,
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i almost fall
asleep all periods,
And please pay attention to your tense form.
You'd better use the past from.Then, the past form of
'fall' should be
'fell'. = =|||
And the last mistake...(orz) you miss an article here:
other people said that a(or the) fool never got a gold,
