原帖由 RIKI 于 2008-5-17 23:45:00 发表
in the forest ,walking
seeing :a key,a broken cup,a lake,a hut,a wall,
有个作业，要用以上要素写个小故事……跪求达人帮忙啊，感激不尽～～～ |
楼主，珠海哪个学校的？我以前一中毕业的，我的E文老师不会出这样的题的……她只会天天上课读《志宏优化设计》，作业就是背多个形容词排列顺序（是小白木屋？还是木小白屋？或者白小木屋？）
我来个欧亨利风格的~~
Thirsty, thirsty....
It has been seven*** hours since I drank up my last drink.
I`m walking in a strange forest. Many trees here, but not even one is alive.
Everything here dead of thirst.
"Damn this place!" I hurl my cup at a tree. The cup dead like everything around. Thirst killed it. It`s meaningless to me if there is no water for it to put in.
Then, a hut fade into my eyesight.
"Is anybody home? I`m a traveller, I need some drink." I knock at the door.
Nobody answers me.
"I`m not a strange guy, I have my ID card with me" I tried again.
Everything is quite as dead except me.
"I`ll pay for it, you can take anything from me." I`m serious.
The only thing that is answering me is my echo.
"Help! I need your help, please, just open the door please!" I cried out.
Maybe I am sentenced like everything around me, I`ll die of thirst.
"Oh, my god..." I abandoned resistance, sit down, wait for death.
Then, I see there a key in the keyhole.
I open the door, and find that it`s not a hut, it`s a wall, and there is a lake behind it.