求ef-a tale of memories每集中间的英文...

赞3L XD，幸苦了，
修正几个语法和拼写错误：
第一段:  "p***ageway"——P A S S A G E W A Y-走廊 n. ;
第二段：最后一句 everything前不应有the;
第三段："With no specific reason, she starting those paintings in the same places where she painted them. "应用过去进行时"was starting"而不是现在分词;
            "The girl started practise drawing her own portrait from the day after the wedding. "应改为"started to practise";
第四段："But the paintings continued to capture her attention without making her bored for first time for month to come. "应是"attention";
第五段："But the paintings were blured.The world itself appeared blured, giving her no clue to see what they were doing.”——“blur”的过去式和过去分词都应该双写r为"Blurred"

P.S.
      没想到ef里面有德语的影子，之前都没听说过这个作品，汗颜……
      有机会要看看！
      Ich liebe das Deutschland.
      I am a germanophile absolutely.